【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
. Y; y' `( o1 }3 n- q8 @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 W' U& J& A. KI already loved you with all my heart
$ h5 R/ y& ], x7 I4 {9 R9 MWe meet and talk everyday,
& ]4 k0 J: L0 x1 `  a  d( @- dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# f/ F1 n" h  m, Z4 G: ]I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# R* ~7 u) \; }I want to confess that I love you,
9 D+ U1 L: c& j( A9 q& O* _% TBut I never did
- Y% n3 W* @! v, E, b' w. zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 t" v' p" f, Q! I+ y+ PIf today isn’t too late,
' Y1 o( Z- J  sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ s6 M% c2 q7 ]. K) Y4 r5 iEntrust my love within your heart
/ [' A* O* ]+ s& pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 x3 H- g4 e/ e* HCan I entrust it to you?
+ `1 s( R3 l% I- P5 ]  f$ P& mEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 Y7 N- T5 k9 O/ G* _- V, V' @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! f0 p( A. D8 c& g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% C' n& Q& v; ?6 a" F2 H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 c! |/ |7 n5 G! ]2 C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 p4 J" P# B0 d" `* [8 b+ V$ C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ D7 K( H' T/ u' Y; A! ]. c6 i, W: j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ I1 V& i( d) E% Z7 O& b: z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 ~8 u" @- D" t8 }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* i* f/ w+ N! M5 U! X2 @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 V( B! y: F# C4 ~1 H$ L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* O4 G. k. X: e) U! T' D$ d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 }3 L- k, K/ x' C<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# _, C. A& o1 w  V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- z: T: R+ x, p. _) ^; K- y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. \6 G; R( c5 \9 x& @7 ?  e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" y3 H; W+ K% t" p5 E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: c4 G! G/ @# j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# B+ J$ m! o' X- e5 N( w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* Y+ n) m, Z! p+ S( `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ X; A. N1 }; b5 X# B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 u) f5 @! b0 I& ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  `" W1 K9 ~. z0 J' p0 I* E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ K1 x5 y2 P- @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" O& ?: I+ }% ]+ i7 m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: P8 c$ Y& T. J9 _<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ |. d$ w+ Q7 U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 L7 D; y& D) b9 M+ I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' U2 B4 a$ K) y0 @! i7 I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 p4 P& L& g& B0 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' e5 `9 j7 J# c7 Q! |# E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. F% }- Z0 {( B: Z1 j* ]+ Q  e% H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" B$ F# ?* ]+ q8 R8 z$ `2 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' w7 K2 V7 W& t# P' i- O0 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 x, N) z3 h& B7 V( B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ m; u; l3 K8 c6 N" ^( ]# b) I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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* Y2 M: L$ c7 c! j! r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 W, |  R* f- O6 k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>