【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 y6 b% `9 U1 n' P0 b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 o$ ^# S; V) b0 E: A1 WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" l* w  A" z* @I already loved you with all my heart
  ^3 S5 ^1 S% r" O% b4 [% \$ M' M9 sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; M* ^) y. s+ W- L' zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 I" S% ?& z% j/ XI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 G" P: t. U! nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 G2 Q2 i# i- XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 d  d9 c/ m2 ?3 p/ |( E, ^If today isn’t too late,
7 o0 u6 x1 E; r( D- a5 {: L: TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: u9 Y, m% m2 v' y4 `Why is it so difficult to express?
0 C) l0 F& I4 PI want to confess that I love you,
2 [1 r! t( x) R% L1 rBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ Q) B9 d6 Y' T/ JIf today isn’t too late,
) t! W3 c9 d5 r0 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 J$ t4 N% n* `1 T5 T( hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- r* I. u4 A5 f# z5 W$ \  J5 v) MEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& @6 Y' d: P! L' }, S; w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- H- ^) K. m) k" b* I/ u4 e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& @, k* G& Z) ]4 k# q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) }$ z$ S/ ^/ U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 O+ M; C, Q' Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 m- C* |) }6 ?3 L; v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( s) P& F2 u! l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 c/ e% M+ ]" [4 B0 G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* m' Q2 z  |# X: H  N) A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ t# Q0 B# t' u5 B; ?8 u2 _4 d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 s2 i; i5 n5 q; D% B4 O  g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! n+ l. h) C6 ]" S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* j. l+ t  u+ |, Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 u! [- I8 B% |1 q) L1 a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% o0 F9 ?6 N- I$ t1 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: p. t+ x. E6 O3 U3 @$ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ {: K4 W. ?1 Z2 ]/ g9 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! Z7 k. \( @9 {( z5 i6 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ C; b( u4 h' j8 u. g  L& ^7 p& Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 v1 `# b1 }; v. H  |2 {& t3 w, B/ |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ G8 s+ i2 O; [# y& ?: ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( I  @  }1 K3 J- L4 d: ^4 f4 k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 u, W3 ]( X& t# a) u9 s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, R, Y  F% O- M7 s) `0 o9 c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ z- E- z, u1 }  Q! N4 c0 H  y6 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 \6 i0 h, S0 z0 S% @; G/ S( E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 E) T+ I/ z# D) W) I4 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- A) U+ k2 k5 f  |" `5 h; I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! m- e# h$ `" J7 i, j; S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. Y7 j8 v8 p( x* J: W/ K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 p9 Y8 ~7 m4 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ y( t" U2 n0 z, W- o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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9 |1 m& @2 U  D' @  N6 Y# T1 w7 ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( p2 W0 u* o. }5 Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# X. p7 m* z; u+ ?/ u  {, y6 O6 C, V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>