【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 m7 G5 [8 U8 ~我另将歌词附在此。
+ g3 M' W6 n$ |: E8 OThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# ?' C4 s7 p' F. Z4 l0 Z, ]$ WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- g, t) W) s' _+ T7 ]. L; }From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! B: u6 L3 D$ i' A) PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  k: ^0 |9 d. sWhy is it so difficult to express?
; }% e" w: f( B/ F: Q; {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 {9 s( H, X) D& TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' A8 j9 ]2 o5 u3 c- C+ ^. j# QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 e$ a6 J/ X+ p: P/ k, e5 b& @6 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& T/ A9 f( f( H' f/ pEntrust my love within your heart
' C6 v- s# x  }: |/ ELove… just the word love
2 B6 f3 B8 U! N# p" z/ EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 p' [  o1 P  S' x0 d% R" }But I never did
/ }9 N8 ^6 k; H1 wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& K/ m+ H* w( z! ?* o3 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! P9 w4 J9 F& XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 X3 S, c8 F% o' {2 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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1 |1 w/ {. U' m/ A6 D6 Q! o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 ?) j" H) {" I' ^3 d/ P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 ~$ M0 L( `: [) k8 k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  z  u, V, Y/ l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; D& g& p6 l4 k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" m+ w# H+ a; g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 {' L' Q( Z. {$ A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, o0 h) {3 t; t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" C, N0 @6 W* P) p) g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# z- B6 H  u+ z5 [0 ^<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 y# }# v4 p4 A) f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 o8 z+ q/ c" Q- \  v* r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; V8 ]* O6 ]% s2 a$ I+ M, R: T5 U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 ^8 M" ^8 f  [3 ?& Z' @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# e2 r) C8 y) |! I) s4 j. \' C# _& ^9 t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- h* [" Q0 I1 a  L5 N: H1 y/ r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 G, _9 z9 T! q* }" O: E* C4 s( ^! V3 W<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" Z* v4 Q: D& ^# A* w) v0 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 }6 M% l  w. s7 `3 w* q8 [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 [" d8 b/ s0 W4 w* ?0 |# P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 W. c* b, r3 H/ m# t1 l6 X4 ~: U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 d( J- [$ k, n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ k/ \  m& ?8 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 \, |# X( y0 w9 u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( r1 k6 Y5 ^/ @# d8 A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 O' v6 Q: x# Z: j' Y. N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" l4 S- n* |8 B<P>But I never did </P>
0 P6 R$ D; A: U+ i, c3 y" r5 P: x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 q5 D7 P7 B! Z( T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ k, H! n- N0 B1 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ {; d: \6 Q1 [$ R% J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ G, h# X& _! q$ g9 p) X: {5 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 z% H/ b+ k) g! z- J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# d9 q* l& X* ]+ G$ }) x- X8 O8 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# H8 {) f$ D7 u) C3 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 g* C* K" U# `- G$ _" L6 ?<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) `6 b( ]/ f) i8 z: w) R" G<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; u, e- N0 E  @. t2 K. K 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 E9 @7 s2 W! |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! A0 i2 k3 v% Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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8 O# ?2 `) F/ ?& }. K: D1 e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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