【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; q7 d8 ]- \9 z; y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 O+ k" Y9 U+ f: eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; c2 L4 N0 Z6 F( q8 O; rI already loved you with all my heart
6 @' g# J+ F+ p% S6 ^We meet and talk everyday,
: t5 B8 q# \- _( q( d. D' j  uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 e/ S% k: @6 r5 O7 o$ _' s! z3 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 s; ]% N/ `3 J; `! e' _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# W  h5 H! f$ M" N/ [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# U( B4 l' `0 C' b3 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  c% H& j; K# A6 J, A2 ZIf today isn’t too late,
  @3 }+ Q$ Z, rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ Z* y6 A" ]5 ^; PEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 y- w1 A9 W( N; w, @! oEntrust my love within your heart
2 U, t+ I& ?1 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ ~* z$ d' @0 b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. p5 t0 X% M; U3 L( I- m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: b& X* v! \9 k7 I6 E1 s( L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 p# c  J5 d7 T; h7 ?* R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& L, u: R& ?2 C* p9 `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ Z& T/ F- b6 z1 ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) B$ P0 w" b7 W" W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" H$ \/ P) D% r6 N( T3 ^! v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. x# Q' z  Z7 y  Y7 k% e  B& B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 _6 |; e; {# q  H" Q& k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ u  _6 E/ C+ d  D  Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 Z8 r- U6 ^! A  H- Q2 z! g8 l6 g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 [" Z  a! T: g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  z0 f: q/ j  q- h0 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* A  u1 V! ^4 t: j& c2 O2 p; C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, F9 Y, t9 n4 t9 f: \! ?) w! B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 z% g5 w5 W, H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# j) ~, Y1 s$ V8 U3 n+ e. C7 O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( U; U, s2 K) G& W* v: R: B$ Y* j<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: O: ]4 m5 g% w; \4 b% I8 S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# ]4 O( ]* c! c( b/ Y8 K" a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ D! I7 T0 A9 F% a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 {2 k8 q# o, y8 _8 Y7 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 @- m' {5 p/ g8 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& o4 r8 g- F, S# }9 t0 i5 k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" K+ x8 B1 O- f+ i) S$ u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>