【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( t& t) m2 G% h" K我另将歌词附在此。
/ U$ S7 x7 i$ b9 D  \3 k$ sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- e+ F! Z& h2 }( m+ H' y0 dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 Q& q: f2 Q: I0 A  N; tWe meet and talk everyday,
' S7 X: i5 k7 B  G+ C6 d  W( vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- h2 W/ u* n# n8 I7 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  n. Q) z6 f% r8 e* n/ qI would probably know how you feel
# b/ E9 z4 ?5 R1 uLove… just the word love
: }1 Q6 @0 V5 [. p+ u' ]$ e% NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 A$ P5 n  ]( x; IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 }8 z; x7 Q1 a  k/ D3 L, a6 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; d9 i, W) w2 \; _8 X1 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- j# U5 [) A9 B" {; |4 oCan I entrust it to you?
) v! c8 h% ]! @0 _Entrust my love within your heart
4 |0 Q% p- L6 ~5 |6 I  c  u  XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: N0 @- u) F: ~  e% x) V4 }) t. n2 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 e, b) q7 y8 q, P* F% d$ X' i/ fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ E3 O' t. J% k8 K7 ?! g; J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 C& ~) [( y  c- s; e; R, ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 H7 b: z; R) p0 p7 u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 B: z1 M+ z$ r$ D, B' M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) }# {/ p% [3 B% P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 o* {9 ]/ W$ Z0 W2 ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 ]( G2 t2 _" s" f1 x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' x: E0 n  b$ r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. z, X: u' u+ R  @  r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) ]! K+ N  E! K3 D; u7 S" a* ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" F2 b& @$ P6 j. ~$ A* r" k$ x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 Q" H0 h5 G% Z- `0 H# M! j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" w+ x9 z+ }2 Z0 |' f! r/ Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  ^: k$ q+ }4 L* u/ f- R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 w( j# q" s: e4 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ l" Y8 s) ~* L& k! L! Z' o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ e. ^& [) T$ g& w- \3 u3 \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; {  r9 x) |4 w- A8 T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 k$ ^2 ^- O5 |7 U4 x4 J! z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& M3 |% p7 f$ W. E2 [" u+ M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 M. E( `4 l; Z" ^. S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 v6 `" U& _- ?+ y8 R% c( [! Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 K& s% L" s0 I' n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 k0 b( z' N4 R: f( v( N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 d) B0 L8 a8 F" P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ L6 _. Y2 W$ C& m( M! s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% G' l/ r3 \: [8 r  w% p1 r2 M: M2 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& f7 S8 `* }+ n1 k2 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 n% x) B! F) T. |3 W% [2 Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>