【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ g7 G4 e7 U; W9 F2 p* K) O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 {$ H1 [1 A, |& g% |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 p. k6 M  ?4 Z1 s6 U! {) JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- z$ T/ X2 y* \4 y3 ~7 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ i, C, w) Z3 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. S* p0 h4 Y# i6 J9 NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 R% k0 n- h4 `3 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% A: O) s! I0 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% }! K9 `$ G& s- fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" r( |" Q$ u* ]9 r5 D7 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% ^- C( D1 r! gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& v# r( L+ x7 b) h/ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  v: x+ k8 u$ ?+ U3 H- E. N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- x' L" G) @, H$ n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ |( N3 |' q( Y* X3 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  Z0 L) Q- W2 z0 v8 l; a/ q* T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' l$ e% Z8 ?4 N5 W: U1 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( l$ E& d# _( R% H8 g1 Y- U; S) q/ }- U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( O& n, g  d* [2 D  @9 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ r6 P; e  N" S, c" \- [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ u$ R$ Y; `. m; f/ E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% [. E' H: z0 v2 m# a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ F% k9 f6 v/ R$ L, z5 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, x3 @5 [6 r" W+ |* x/ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 }, U# y8 b: Y8 y5 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 b# g$ }2 z; V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 N( v% V: B( A1 [- l4 e1 E5 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 p2 I+ \: k5 t* C( H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) r; \0 r8 X. T& d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 T) c' y4 c' r# |& l( B& {8 r: H  q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Z, c3 v1 v2 {* R& u. r8 I7 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; `- C) x' H+ ^  J! U# e' C. r% o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 w8 t8 U; \3 G& o6 ^! F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( K+ ^0 M9 |2 s( L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 [2 w7 m: D8 j+ T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. H5 I; C- N$ R/ t# z, Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 n3 K3 ?0 q; z& K6 b9 k3 H) t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 L, M/ C9 l2 |' R<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 a, `0 g  `  Z3 k8 v. L$ f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" v) z7 q/ Z' A' {, [9 R' ^7 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# K4 Y8 W; r( }1 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ?' ?0 \: [% o7 f- E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- L8 u, _. M; a5 c% _/ |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 B0 W+ J3 ]$ ]' _: m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( q" K& ~9 e3 t- A+ ]+ L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>