【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 ^. t  s( f. \0 e/ q$ x4 A3 e歌词我附在后面。
0 a7 F* K% ~0 q# d2 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 _1 @3 f. s; z  |  QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 q# |4 _' X# D* GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! ^8 \: ]) \9 A$ u/ O1 S8 BSeeing the sky content with its love
/ {6 x' T6 n& S% R1 r( V# @$ ^& JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& W/ g, _! l# w+ X: G8 \; xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 p* B  e) p: C+ O8 ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, j! {* a$ [( {' H6 i8 B! CNothing can compare to my love
, V) s0 _8 {; Z/ F  r- H5 T9 Q8 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 y- ^8 |2 i2 v" f, Z! D- G1 I+ MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 ]4 Q7 V6 z; d/ AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 S* F. B5 R6 AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; l& R. Y! u2 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, K& t8 O0 y+ v! t$ z# ^: sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; g$ M/ t. O$ [* C  r, J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 M- Z9 o- M/ B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; I! `9 |% \: Q+ l# g) F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' n' X8 r7 i' `: v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, p( p# D2 K/ ^& W; t# h4 m% f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, B: y& b! ]" s5 z5 G( l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* l1 F/ n% y3 v6 l, `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ Y5 H# n$ ~$ Y. ?. g  n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 M( @( y- P- F$ z# y3 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ }& {. j  {, n# [. \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 B7 a( \# H6 o. b8 Z( t2 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 \; R# O$ J' z) H7 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* ?$ V/ h: ]) q8 e4 `4 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 R9 `! ~) \: q. [: F* b4 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( Y4 v) b) U( y1 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 a4 l; a0 N  Z& N5 Y! F: W4 k/ z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' a1 V, m4 ~& [# J  p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; I0 M7 H! Z" p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 N3 V( e2 e( W' u: q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" C) C9 V, V0 _! o1 g" b  k* o; W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) y) ?8 _/ l8 }1 X! p; @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: b) Y4 [) ~  y$ Y: U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ _+ L7 r9 }0 C" z( {. z  y4 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! ?) A* G/ H9 `- d  I2 O6 H5 K' @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 m( [( z# o! n: w9 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 h$ S3 D4 @0 Q. r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 j" z8 {% x: H3 P9 ~) X3 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  `9 C5 v% M" [2 Q, @' a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>