【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( l. v0 W6 ]4 v( f) X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 M! [7 h* A0 y# z/ }/ ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) F  @8 O% q  bWith the moon kissing it every night
, }2 S# O, Q5 n' NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 O3 F8 W% e! l. sYou needn’t fear anything
. @/ X" T( K9 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) N, ~. ^0 k! c8 }7 e5 O* \8 SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 j) t1 A( [% k0 k& H7 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( x6 E" |7 O; q4 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* E0 X, M9 T6 w* U9 gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! x. O" ?% c3 a, v2 Z& ?I regret not dying
9 e( k  ?; ^; A" j' ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 i4 ?( X$ B8 t4 }With such a tongue as yours,
. a# o* b. s8 d9 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* g3 q! T' x7 h7 n0 E9 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 q7 K0 y( o9 YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% V  O( `9 H4 C0 q, `5 g* }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& Q  g( z8 F6 G) R# C  U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% O/ i" t6 K4 c( x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 c/ y2 y6 r% Q7 i7 v4 l" Z$ S9 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 ]- g' T1 c. ~% ~/ H+ C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 A6 L) Q+ G& y% o% E+ e" P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ {7 Y- Y9 K- Q  f, s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 M% e# r) O  G) p: a9 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% A) X1 o5 T9 Y6 q' z( g; }3 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- _$ a. t' |2 ]. f; F- s3 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 j' F# ]( p9 k7 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; I* G( a. h" L, V) _7 j1 s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Z6 ~" u) A  r/ J! H# J' l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' ^+ g2 X. C8 z* M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 h$ E3 `+ ^: Z3 B: _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ v5 u" g7 j2 N, t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) W) E. S# \/ N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% e$ z/ M: Q' t# e6 y; i2 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) P4 H0 m7 q: h+ G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) ]7 n9 e: i+ s! }( v& s+ D: r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' m% Q/ E: P( h6 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. v6 g- W9 x# z7 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* G( d) W3 e3 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, P6 c4 i* C( o* A% Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* o+ L3 @- {# y! v3 i8 y( h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 j# F9 r+ z* L2 M) h# X* J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>