【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 Z; b0 L5 M4 h; Y$ O2 s歌词我附在后面。
: O( Y7 V, _5 {# `  c5 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 E. U* {) I" A  N; @$ jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ I* ?! e8 w( {) m# I$ k  x& sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 I2 V9 m" g5 Z1 m. BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" u5 ~% {1 H4 L# }3 t5 GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# G1 `; n! G2 T6 o) A9 j( [3 RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 f+ p" o1 }$ d* xI love you I love you with all my heart
8 ^5 w- v/ g# g. B/ FNothing can compare to my love
+ `7 y4 r, }# }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# l, V1 O  x$ s$ ^# d- OI want so much to see inside your heart
8 m! _) B  I/ ]3 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! k* H1 g& I- ^8 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 p! }8 h! i1 {4 B1 S9 B9 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" y% c6 y" \/ ]0 E) B* C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 V. J( q0 ~+ F& n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) J! \0 Y; G* c/ m! @! e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 [8 C5 @$ |' j* T4 D+ u% ^# f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 I* y# m4 C! ?" m4 D- _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) i, |5 x# Y  i" G& P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 ~# W7 v  @" ^: |' u/ q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 _/ w) k5 \  C( R7 p/ [( ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 c7 f, G2 k* {" i( g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* Z9 \* F$ L1 Z  G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% j$ @& ~1 a  a3 K8 i) T9 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- j! n, f) L# f2 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! ?5 G* e1 k, a, ^8 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. V! Q; U$ R' P" t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' r1 T* g& Z5 Q" K/ M7 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) X7 \- r; w' l) p* T3 ]' u! G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 x& O9 b* O. a- c& w! Z$ ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ G1 S9 K' s: R6 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 Q* r0 b0 a5 [# c$ V. w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& H% q! D& Z3 n( x0 I5 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! k( u- z$ S, j1 L9 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: J; b3 {) `2 x' G; B3 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ j$ Z, I- l  r( y" i# w2 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" d, m+ L: r) i  ~4 g) m/ I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 C, |( k0 t) _7 ^/ w! d, _. \, S<P>I regret not dying</P>
) b3 w+ N$ q1 x/ g. c' T& B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 o4 g/ |$ t1 i" M6 z4 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 h" h: [" P" Y+ N7 d/ g0 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! n5 ]0 W0 u' o6 I4 V# h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. @* b  W, j$ g7 X6 J# M0 V" L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, b( ]4 x- Q. [4 z, M* G2 J$ R9 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 }9 W$ b# M+ x- d; K1 E. V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>