【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, [6 ]: Q! E4 B6 e! G" j& G" y2 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, m1 j6 }" Y; s! mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 ]9 w- m5 t/ K0 t3 @2 mEvery other word you utter is love
  B% J6 `, i) o/ kI really want to know just how much you love me
( e& o3 I+ z2 l. O( Y0 e5 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 H, Y3 h9 Y' B" m2 C$ Y0 }5 zI want so much to see inside your heart
2 k# a" C7 J  ~  k$ t, MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 {8 }+ A' I0 V' I* o2 u% v3 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- o$ g/ c2 b! P6 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 E' ]. S0 f# y9 E$ }! W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 f8 ~/ a: |) V: s. p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 s1 l7 \' y3 z+ }- b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 C$ O& O! B9 U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 _3 O& z, G( @5 ~% O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! `/ B& b. D- |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  Z! h2 |% f" t5 b4 G3 d5 z& @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& `0 }6 M' h8 Z: i+ V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& ]1 }! U  d6 \* l" b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 ?! p* D- U2 R' f9 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& T5 ]+ v0 K% G4 E+ x) @' k. S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 j! M+ [2 b6 t- e9 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% ]* F; c* M+ k! H8 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ A# j* N3 _# n# s! f# c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: A8 ~# \* e7 K5 G2 h6 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 F  S( A9 V5 r5 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  I, M4 X7 r% s  t) v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' Z, A2 L1 [- U6 L# U1 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, }* i. n& _& v; K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 D- _! x/ \( X/ R/ E" [: C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: ]3 R) R+ ]1 p0 Y9 q6 r8 }8 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 G9 d7 N$ Q; C/ [8 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& d; X+ o3 I( O/ m$ O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: W# \3 S9 j! q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 ?9 _) y" ]0 J( v# F/ s  o; N5 Z6 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: j+ l+ M  S; t$ i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# ^" \4 E0 b8 R$ ^5 r0 v' A- v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- W8 t  |9 I2 A# y# y' s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>