【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 z6 M( t$ n% q/ R+ fWith the moon kissing it every night
5 a$ a! |' [& z. OSeeing the sky content with its love
5 g7 r) W+ U2 N3 n& X$ w: sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 j; Z9 L, r* _: M, }% T$ TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Z2 }  m9 T8 {6 F, sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* S0 i9 n: p* Y! cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 q8 A+ b. @+ t6 c/ o- BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; S9 E5 t( D9 a: W) b" P) z/ kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% R; A8 ?4 z' @6 F- tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. q+ b8 i$ V. Q. G$ H3 k; AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 {! s, Y8 T  I  Z0 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* f/ r$ y4 h, [/ ~1 E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  ?: M( i5 a+ f6 p8 T' E8 f! D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. [3 ]. r! ]1 u; [) q9 W3 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# [8 t+ D; S% I6 Q  X4 e+ O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 f! |7 `/ ~: W3 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! `5 M4 I( G# f* C  g- `: w, B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 t$ q9 v( e" b* x0 l+ y, s<P>你无需担心</P>
7 a6 C' O# f! k+ E; g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) g8 o+ G: p7 A3 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' n( s( g6 A$ z7 H! }1 l$ U& y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# p7 K3 _/ f( Y7 b) K9 ?8 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 i6 k/ [3 f8 k) g  J3 Q$ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 ^. i6 W) i$ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, j) x3 _# A0 c5 P  Q1 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' e' w5 Z2 x2 l, M, D  P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! i2 L1 R' y) _4 L0 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. K. R; W, F, U4 ?- ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 d) \0 T" E  T; {( j: h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 V6 j( b' }/ i( M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 q/ m. U; x0 W/ O* ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 ]9 I8 ^; W. A7 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 H1 j+ N8 @( b4 a" t4 p- \* K- R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" e- T/ h( o6 q, \& ?, u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' q% L8 v, S8 ?# @# U0 U; W0 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( Y- _+ j9 Q3 v. X- n+ A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>