【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
( L- N3 E) N( e3 U, Cxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

" ^; B9 W5 X" i: z; F9 a3 g一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

+ A6 a; A! W3 Z: a) S2 c. p7 ~5 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
1 [6 J4 x0 F/ H7 z, jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
  o* w7 M* j3 r5 m6 Q% ~The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
  e# i* s. ~, I7 hSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
" ]7 r% C4 ^- Y" oIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
9 b. w  ~( X* j2 H4 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- u. V( L2 k! T2 L我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
" z  y7 ^/ a3 S) x( \& g/ r, QEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
% G- Z: ~* q( D" H+ ^% M: ?6 m爱你爱你 全心全意
) \: @* ~* K1 O* qNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
" V, B  a: p+ j) t& m3 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
: S) O! H: j: E/ o' |5 n" b我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
0 Z; i9 C7 Y) k1 w& |3 q你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
3 \1 c5 v! V: S3 {) {3 c1 LI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; A( b" h" U! A7 u7 K- B你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
$ M, U+ D' a) w# |, _真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
, i( f0 m9 X7 ^. d' h& F也恨不得  多如千万
, W+ B" f0 N: v) QWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
0 o. F8 K( C; A; oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 Z- B/ l- @+ i若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
' ~8 p! S3 T9 Q- m. j向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 i% e' s2 L" O: r  {9 a# S从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
$ i# i$ d2 l% j' {From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
7 u! b: B0 h- V% p" ?从此别无他意
# e* ^7 _. [; \& T6 V* I" U: ?We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
  A! r$ F- f' @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
; T6 p9 c; D0 R# {5 P& xI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
2 ^5 p" p4 Q) _/ k/ U爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
" s- `! ]$ D2 ]% T- R  H# ]I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
1 H( d3 z4 J+ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- L( ~2 j1 b1 w6 A& J只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
1 h4 _% O8 u5 D' E$ X! f2 o8 hIf today isn’t too late,
$ ]# E3 |1 q( ^3 T假如还不太迟
+ P+ b$ n3 q1 R; X; pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  g0 Z! R, k% v" t今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
  [5 J  ~* l& G- x' ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# {4 Z. R1 M. M# h$ V* w不愿这份爱 逝如流水
6 q: T& V* ^1 Z: U+ x3 KCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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8 O4 Z, |2 t" |. w7 y5 Z% O6 xLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
2 h4 ^2 N* p' ]" _我多想向你表白
But I never did
& ^/ \5 x' ?8 Y6 ^6 t( c7 @7 h1 j却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 b8 S' H" Z) D# G' o1 y9 l0 |" `只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
* y; U" j! \8 [: E( F假如还不太迟
. M. c; z) ^% ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
  t! B: A6 m: L5 vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 }& ?% K3 k* a+ W不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
; n  F/ _. l1 L" U可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

( `4 X9 {7 h7 o7 s+ ^1 p; n& a. xCan I entrust it to you?
- Q; ^: D7 _' `1 S可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
5 _4 C; t: N, p9 r% K从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
4 R5 j) P: @- B% l9 J6 r3 c& B刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
9 Q- n& P0 [" Hvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

1 a& w+ l. z* ?+ B5 u不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。